2921/12/30 (英語日記) Trial Seminar

Giver Life(英語日記)

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日本語ではフロントセミナーとか無料セミナーとか言っているものに参加しましたので、その感想を書いています。

Original

December 30th , 2021. Thursday.

A trial seminar

I attended a trial seminar related with the secret of Jewish Big Success. In the early morning on December 25th, 2021, one of my friends sent me LINE talk about this seminar. When she sent me this message, the deadline was already over. But I gave it a try and my application was accepted.

It was about kind of a success philosophy, like Napoleon Hill and Brian Tracy. Since it was trial seminar (for promotion), it was free of charge. The speaker was very loud and energetic. He was filled with self-confidence. And his story was very interesting and had wonderful power.

Continuing the question “Did you live a real life?”, he said to us “Let’s suppose you are dead today”. When I imagined my own funeral, my family was crying over my sudden death in my mind. At that time, I was not sure but teared up a little. I was surprised at myself. That was a work about what we were going to do when we went back one year before our death.

In another session, he told us the story about Beethoven. When he seriously suffered from his deaf disease and confessed in front of the God that he was thinking of killing himself, the God encouraged Beethoven to compose Ode to joy on behalf of the God. Beethoven said to the God that “As I am pleased to give you my eyes and anything you want, please give me a power to make such a great work.” and burst into tears. Being true or false, this scene also moved me very much. That was why he did a tremendous work, which made total sense to me.

I felt myself somehow not normal in the seminar. A power of speech caused me to be moved. At the same time, I considered that a strong desire that I wanted to change my life made me so emotional like that.

Corrected

December 30th , 2021. Thursday.

A trial seminar

I attended a trial seminar related with the secret of Jewish Big Success. In the early morning on December 25th, 2021, one of my friends sent me LINE talk about this seminar. When she sent me this message, the deadline was already over. But I gave it a try and my application was accepted.

It was about kind of a success philosophy, like Napoleon Hill and Brian Tracy. Since it was trial seminar (for promotion), it was free of charge. The speaker was very loud and energetic. He was filled with self-confidence. And his story was very interesting and had wonderful power.

Continuing the question “Did you live a real life?”, he said to us “Let’s suppose you are dead today”. When I imagined my own funeral, my family was crying over my sudden death in my mind. At that time, I was not sure but teared up a little. I was surprised at myself. That was a work about what we were going to do when we went back one year before our death.

In another session, he told us the story about Beethoven. When he seriously suffered from his deaf disease and confessed in front of the God that he was thinking of killing himself, the God encouraged Beethoven to compose Ode to joy on behalf of the God. Beethoven said to the God that “As I am pleased to give you my eyes and anything you want, please give me a power to make such a great work.” and burst into tears. Being true or false, this scene also moved me very much. That was why he did a tremendous work, which made total sense to me.

I felt myself somehow not normal in the seminar. A power of speech caused me to be moved. At the same time, I considered that a strong desire that I wanted to change my life made me so emotional like that.